Ode to Ovid

This is the first part to a three part series
Read part II here
Read part III here
The divine woman rose from the dust
of her fallen father and grandfathers.
Her naked body warm
and beating with life;
Her hair so long it
brushed the ground she walked on.
She was gifted with bliss
from her fathers who begged
Hades for her happiness.
She wandered the woods
and fell upon a man
a woodsman.
He was skilled in his craft;
she admired him so much.
She wrapped her sunkissed arms
around him and expressed her love
for him.
He, a married man,
could not tell such a divine beauty
the word no. So he promised to love her
till the end of days;
but that she had to remain in the woods
and heβd return to her everyday.
She, in her bliss,
obliged.
She spent her days singing with the birds
gathering flowers and wading in the
hidden waters.
Her fathers looked up with content
to see their daughter so happy
and healthy
It didnβt matter that
the woodsman was married
so long as their daughter
was happy and thriving in her own
true nature.
The woodsman was consistent
with his visits and brought her great
chairs and built her a shelter.
He brought chocolates and wines,
and loved her more than he loved
his own wife and children.
One day, a kingβs soldier
entered the woods
~Saschia Johnson~

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I read part two first and now I understand it fully after reading this. I Love the series.. can’t wait to read your book ππΎ
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Hello my dear friend. I am adding you to my story “The Island”. The chapter I will write tonight. Your wonderful poetry made me see a dancing nude lady who prayed to the moon and the stars. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
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Awesome! You’re inspiring me
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I am following Hemingway rule. Finish one story before create new ones. I have six to finish, need ending. The Island is number one to be finished. You motivate me too dear Jayne.
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Ohhh hahaha I’m following that rule too. π π© Good luck π π hardwork pays off is what I hear
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We hope, my friend.
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The chapter is finished dear Jayne. I hope you like. the island chapter twelve.
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Woohooo!!
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A long chapter. Two more chapters and this one shall be done.
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π²π²ππππΌππΌππΌ I hope you take time to celebrate your finished product. π₯³
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A CLASSIC PAINTING. A GOOD CLIFF HANGER ENDING—LEAVING THEM WONDERING!
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“A classic painting” what a compliment ! Thank you
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IS IT A GOYA-?
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Oh hahaha I thought you were talking about my writing. π π€¦π½ββοΈ The painters names is Alexander Nyulassy the name of the Painting is Leda and the Swan and can be found in the Slovak National Gallery its Oil on canvas. I had to Google search it. Not information on the artist.
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I do appreciate your effort—and your writing style! sorry for not expressing myself clearly!
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You are totally fine. I’m in my head a lot.
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and what creative mind is not-“
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I appreciate your interactions and your kind words very much.
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I try to respond and act as the God I serve would want me too.
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I never questioned that. I read a couple of your pieces. I love how they are written informally. Freeverse all the way!
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Read my Bio. if you wish. glad you like this style—-most of these are not strict limericks even if I do follow that general form—not edgy enooughQ
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Just so you know I am not the other Jayne who commented on your work. I would never judge someone in such a way based on their poetry. I’m sorry that you were so harshly judged.
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I know you’re not.! But having searched for the other Jayne and found your work I am more than happy to have discovered you! π
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Ohh ok ok. Hahaha that makes me feel much better. π
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YOU ARE THE GEM…I FOUND INSTEAD!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
AN INTERESTING POST…WITH AN UNUSUAL ENDING! PARDON THE NUDITY—IT IS, I BELIEVE, KNOWN AS CLASSICAL ART!
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Thank you very much for the share. π
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my pleasure—truly!
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